To be honest, I don't think I've loved a group of characters more in an IF I've read until this one! Everybody feels like their own person, three-dimensional, and I like the relationship dynamics system you have going on.
I was wondering if you planned on adding more ROs besides Jax and Sarah? For example, Felix or Andrew? If not, totally cool! I love Jax a lot, he's a big goof :]
I just wanted to tell you that I really like this IF and feel that it deserves much more attention than it's gotten so far. For some reason it rarely appears among the related games when I've been exploring another itch IF, I don't know why this is, but I do think that's a huge shame.
I particularly like interacting with the other characters and finding out their secrets and, particularly the Sarah romance. If I could have changed anything, it would have been to have less horror and even more focus on the interactions with the other characters and not having to worry about saving them. Of course, you're the writer and the one who decides how to do things. But I wanted you to know that I think making interesting NPCs and MC/NPC interactions is an area where you really shine and that the discovering secret mechanic is a really fun and interesting one. So if you should ever make another IF without the horror element, but with the same amount of interesting NPCs, enjoyable romance and still using that secret mechanic, I'd be really interested in reading/playing that.
Thank you very much for this comment, I guess now i know what i should be focusing on. I dont like my characters being hurt so in this game its always up to you if you want to kill the character or not, i made it a choice because i feel the same way about worrying too much about character deaths so the game will always give you the options to save, leave or end them yourself i hope this helps you enjoy the game in some way and again it really helps to know I'm doing something right :) as for another game we will see, this one is taking me a long time haha.
Just the two for now, Sarah and Jax. I'm focusing on finishing the game right now but after that when i go back through and clean it all up I may add in some of the ones I cut out, is there one you like specifically? I can try to add them back in if i have the time.
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To be honest, I don't think I've loved a group of characters more in an IF I've read until this one! Everybody feels like their own person, three-dimensional, and I like the relationship dynamics system you have going on.
I was wondering if you planned on adding more ROs besides Jax and Sarah? For example, Felix or Andrew? If not, totally cool! I love Jax a lot, he's a big goof :]
I just wanted to tell you that I really like this IF and feel that it deserves much more attention than it's gotten so far. For some reason it rarely appears among the related games when I've been exploring another itch IF, I don't know why this is, but I do think that's a huge shame.
I particularly like interacting with the other characters and finding out their secrets and, particularly the Sarah romance. If I could have changed anything, it would have been to have less horror and even more focus on the interactions with the other characters and not having to worry about saving them. Of course, you're the writer and the one who decides how to do things. But I wanted you to know that I think making interesting NPCs and MC/NPC interactions is an area where you really shine and that the discovering secret mechanic is a really fun and interesting one. So if you should ever make another IF without the horror element, but with the same amount of interesting NPCs, enjoyable romance and still using that secret mechanic, I'd be really interested in reading/playing that.
Thank you very much for this comment, I guess now i know what i should be focusing on. I dont like my characters being hurt so in this game its always up to you if you want to kill the character or not, i made it a choice because i feel the same way about worrying too much about character deaths so the game will always give you the options to save, leave or end them yourself i hope this helps you enjoy the game in some way and again it really helps to know I'm doing something right :) as for another game we will see, this one is taking me a long time haha.
how many love interests is there?
Just the two for now, Sarah and Jax. I'm focusing on finishing the game right now but after that when i go back through and clean it all up I may add in some of the ones I cut out, is there one you like specifically? I can try to add them back in if i have the time.
I don't know if it's just me, but the pictures aren't showing up on my screen. I don't know why though...
They are for the download version of the game, It's not just you haha. I'll be putting that up when i finally finish the main story. Sorry about that.
You're cool, I was just worried my computer was messing up for something.
Found an issue where if you select a second ailment, the link to progress is broken. Seems to happen regardless of the combonation.
Thank you very much. It should be fixed now.
I stumbled on this by chance and I'm glad I did. Confident writing and characters that are really easy to care about. Keep it up!
Ngl this is amazing. I am seriouslu wondering where all the comments at.
Haha thank you, it's really nice to know you liked it, i never get comments so this was a surprise. Thank you again for trying my IF.